【Lang-8】今日の学び_20100929

Lang-8

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・Recently, I have been learning English on an internet English language school.
  × Recently, I have been learning English on internet English language school.

・I started it about two months ago and I’m studying English every day.
  × I started it about two months ago and studying English every day.

・Therefore I can write a diary now more fluent compared to before.
  × Therefore I can write diary now more fluentry to compared to before.

・I have a bad backache today.
  × My back has very ache today.

・I have sore ache.
  × I have a muscle ache.

・On Wednesdeay  and Saturday.
  × On Wedneseday and on Saturday.

・on the internet
  × on internet