【PV】今日の学び_20101108

Private Lesson

Dogネタ2本のライティングまとめ。

うぅーん、、どんな発想をしたらこんな文章が書けるんだぁー！？とわめいてみた。

Johnの一言はこうだった。

FOCUS is very important! :)

Thank you!

【News Lesson】

・ I think we can keep dogs as pets if we can take care of them.
× I think we might keep dogs as pets if we can take care of them.

・ I think some of Japanese have talents of making things and they also like studying.
× I think some of Japanese have talents of making and they like studying.

・ Vets can encourage pet owners by telling them that they could not only wash pets but also find illness when they take their pet to them.
× Vets can encourage that they could not only washing to pets but also finding to illness when pet owners take their pet to them.

・ If I feel this machine is cheep, I would buy it.
× If I feel this machine is cheeper, I would buy it.

・ Recently there is a sharp yen apprenciation against the dollar. Now, I can buy things made in foreign countries cheper than before.
× Recently a sharp yen appreciation against the dollar so that I can buy things made in foreign cheeper than before.