【PV】今日の学び_20101101

Private Lesson

11月はじめは、プライベートレッスンのライティングから。

今日のトピックはドイツの移民問題。

ちなみに、ちょっとしたいざこざから、講師のJohnにクレームのメールを書くことに…。

英語でクレーム文章を書けるほど上達できたのは、君のおかげだよ、John…。

【News Lesson】

・ I think there aren’t so much multicultralism in Japan because there are fewer immigrants in Japan than other country.
× I think there aren't multicultral so much in Japan. Because in Japan there are fewer immigrants than other country.

・ I don’t understand why the plan of multicultral society in Germany had “utterly failed”.
× I don't understand why a multicultural society in Germany is " utterly failed ".

・ I think the people who lived longer in Germany can’t accept other cultures from the new immigrants.
× I think people live longer in Germany than immigrants can't accept other cultuer.

・ We can know many things from other culture and our life would be more fun.
× We can know many things from other culture and our life would be fun.

・ I have not met such kind of person, but there might be people have anti-immigrant feeling in my country.
× I didn't meet such a person, but there might be people who have anti-immigrant feeling in my country.

・ I think  most of Germans want to have economic success all by themselves.
× I think most of German want to success of economic by themselves.

・ I think some people are being hysterical when it comes to immigration.
× I think some people will be hysterical when it comes to immigration.